Yuki Onna

The Yuki Onna (snow woman) of Japanese folklore appears on snowy nights as a pale woman of unnatural beauty with long black hair and a white kimono. She leaves no footprints and is described as floating in mist instead of being shown with feet. In many stories she appears to lost travellers in snow storms and lures them to their deaths.

Sorry it's so small and feel free to critique (I don't have a subcription yet.)

Here are the critiques I have so far, which I'm working on -

The man in the back looks like a one armed zombie risen to kill the middle guy
Yuki onna has a giant popeye arm - fixed!
Yuki onna looks very very flat, update with references to make her more substantial
Man in back is funny looking